Sunday, April 12, 2009

stagger

i stammer i stutter
i stagger around
don't know what i utter
can't make a sound

you shake me you flush me
you bring out my best
just trying sweet lady
to get at the rest

7 comments:

Linda S. Socha said...

Beautiful and lovely romantic sentiments....Great post
Linda

Kori said...

Just wanted to stop by and tell you Happy Easter!

Also I just noticed that I'm not updating on your reader. Guess it's cause I'm preivate. Hmm

stephanie said...

This is very rap-like - how hip & funky of you :D

I like!

Shadow said...

intense!!!

Jessie said...

very real!!!

i'm not in a smiley mood -- but they're there somewhere ...
excellent job!

clean and crazy said...

this is so sweet, like a new infatuation just getting started.

petra michelle; Whose role is it anyway? said...

Love the rhythm and alliteration, Larry! A fun piece~!