sucked up into a storm of love
a sure enough cat 5 pavement peeler
one that sticks pine needles in brick walls
whirling wind of emotional involvement
with other fragments of life spinning in the mix
like some scene out of the Wizard of Oz
where the cow flies by, and the house, and
the socks, and clothes line and all the rest
of life's mundane possessions
sucked in to a tornado of love
cause i was there once
it was good
i remember
don't you
think
5 comments:
i hope that wasn't your place. ...
yes ... yes it was
how.... compulsive! urgent! all-encompassing!
The ravaging storm of love shaped in a tornado, Larry! Brilliant! :))
I like the urgency, too.
This poem of human passion, powerful and all consuming, torrid and overwhelming, that hits you like a tornado does. Tis wonderful, made clear with your suberb use of words and emotions.
Most enjoyable.
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