Monday, December 22, 2008

fresh words


wonderful sigh summing intense feeling
discovery great beauty near and revealing
respect, dignity, reverence's pure adulation
deeply moving for the journey's creation

innocent joy expression complete yet undone
threads of forgiveness binding all as one
the invisible body of thought and emotion
behind all the actions of love and devotion

11 comments:

Kori said...

Your writing amazes me. Beautiful!

Danielle said...

what a great way to start a Monday!

Unknown said...

Me(Kawan) and my best friend (ICARO)
love and follow your blog,
congratulations on your blog!

Jessie said...

Nice ... I love the last paragraph. :-)

Michael said...

nice two verses Larry, Im on holiday now at last, all calm and unstresssed, oh please let time go slow so 5th Jan and the monastery stay far off in the future.
Anyway Larry got to get to my AA meeting now

Wait. What? said...

Have a great Holiday Larry!

Eric S. said...

Nice, you convey to your readers the feelings behind your prose.

stephanie said...

I've always liked the word 'adulation.' And 'threads of forgiveness binding all as one' is an extraordinary line.

Lovely.

Anonymous said...

I love the "reverence's pure adulation / deeply moving for the journey's creation"...fresh indeed!

Shadow said...

fresh. inspiring. something to go for... it's lovely!

MuseSwings said...

Beautiful! Your poetry is wonderful! Have a blessed Christmas, Larry G!