impulse of the child
inside it's all poetic
suddenly you smile
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a dab of background, I was at an event last night and a child of similar age to the one in the picture (judging by the dental work), well, she got to smiling when I would give her a wink or a nod and it was a "sudden smile" that we shared - you know those times when impish joy takes over the moment and you have a child grinning, well it was one... so I made a note of the term "sudden smile" and vowed to elaborate... wah-lah! today's haiku availed itself as the "poifect" opportunity...
Have a wonderfully childish day!
LarryG
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inside it's all poetic
suddenly you smile
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a dab of background, I was at an event last night and a child of similar age to the one in the picture (judging by the dental work), well, she got to smiling when I would give her a wink or a nod and it was a "sudden smile" that we shared - you know those times when impish joy takes over the moment and you have a child grinning, well it was one... so I made a note of the term "sudden smile" and vowed to elaborate... wah-lah! today's haiku availed itself as the "poifect" opportunity...
Have a wonderfully childish day!
LarryG
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9 comments:
Larry this is absolutely darling, how I wish I could write like this.
Heehee, cute as a button. Is that your son?
Great haiku :)
How true and what a great haiku for the challenge. I was way off this week LOL. Ooops...didn't follow the instructions too well :) Well done my friend :)
children are so inspirational!
love haiku, yours is awesome, L.
Let's all vow to partake in more "sudden smiles" throughout our day!
I love the story, and I love the haiku!
oh yes! here's to a wonderful childish day!!!
that was adorable -- the interaction between the both of you and the smile.
great haiku!
smiles,
Hey! that's my child right now!!!! How did you get the photo??? LOL
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