Heads or Tails
A "royal rhyme" is iambic pentameter of the form ababbcc (7 lines)
My humble attempt below.
To lift inside, renew, vitally live
So special, blissful, is the way your aid
A trait exposed, engaged, enlarged you give
Not up for sale, barter, exchange or trade
That friendship proves that oft this does invade
Brings depth, devotion, peace, good grace loyal
my heart, this soul, in mind, strength, rhyme, royal.
4 comments:
I don't think it was just an attempt.. I think you did extremely well. :)
(Your link pointed to the "job" HoT. I got here though.. hehe!)
yeah you did... lol
wow, excellent. i've tried those in the past, but they elude me... can't fird the rhythm if you will. you've done it beautifully!
A great poem. I wouldn't say it was humble or an attempt at all.
And thanks for commenting on my limerick. It is the first one I have written since school xx years ago.
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