Wednesday, February 4, 2009

potential, tangle

happens all the time,
unsuspecting or not
surprise with emotion,
do you know what you've got?

it can hit in a moment,
swoop in after days
could be potential
those are its ways

the mind in a tangle
the face in a flush
symptoms too classic
it's a great big crush!

11 comments:

Shadow said...

oh love is not picky, not selective, not very subtle, when it hit you you've had it... and i love love. feeling, being, experiencing, dreaming, all of it!

Noelle Dunn.... A Poet in Progress said...

beautifully said...great, exciting feeling! and Thanks for your nice comments on my page.

Jack said...

And I have a great big smile! It's February, the month for crushes and romance ;)

Enjoy your Wednesday Larry!

Jessie said...

That was charming, whimiscal -- loved it!!!

Three BIG smiles!!!

clean and crazy said...

AAAwww you really took me back with that one, in fact I still have a big crush right now with my honey.

petra michelle; Whose role is it anyway? said...

Isn't it the way? Expressed beautifully, Larry!

Danielle said...

I love the feelings of a crush! You've expressed them so well!

Femin Susan said...

Hi......
That is just amazing..so pretty!

Maude Lynn said...

Crushes are such fun!

Anonymous said...

YES!
You called it out by name :)
Wonderful words...

Jodi said...

Thumbs up! How long does it take you to write these amazing verses?