Monday, February 23, 2009

survivor - Remix #8

awaken reality, feel sensations of loss,
intuition's cognition, esoteric distraught
wounds can burn, sear, even numb
tremendous sensation a world's weight above

shortly after depth of solitude comes
focus on the rise of life's terrain
fog's mist envelopes surroundings
clouded over the lost lovely scene

so take a breath, take a hand, gaze into eyes
let struggle be shared, patience dispels lies
take heart, two encourage one another freely
gifts for common good raise up humanity
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This remix based on the reality of being a survivor


3 comments:

Linda S. Socha said...

Yes. Exactly. Well said
Linda

Shadow said...

it's great how you converted that into a poem, well done!

petra michelle; Whose role is it anyway? said...

Hope exudes from this poem, Larry!
And with a little help from one's friends! :))