Wednesday, July 22, 2009

Now the kissing




Kissing finale,*
The silence of the moment,
humming in my head.



*inspired by "Now the kissing is over" , a Rumi quote.

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8 comments:

Jessie said...

it's lovely -- well done
:-)

Meg said...

Haiku's are easier than sonnets.

Kay said...

beautiful! :)

clean and crazy said...

not sure what a haiku is but this is short and sweet, leaving a lot to my own imagination, like what happened before the final kiss...

Jenn @ youknow... that blog? said...

My friend - I found this by accident because you didn't post your link to the list! ;)

Wonderful haiku - thanks for participating. I'm going to add your link if you don't mind, so others can come and enjoy your post and site as well.

Hope to see you next week with another haiku! Have a terrific evening.

stephanie said...

This is simply stunning.

Jenn @ youknow... that blog? said...

Hi Larry :)

[in response to your comment on my site]On my Wednesday posts, you'll find (at the bottom) a "Mr. Linky" application with a field that lets you put in your name and your URL to the post for your own Haiku - hit enter and it automagically adds it for you. Then I really appreciate a quick comment on the same post, to let me know you've got it up on your site. It's a great way to share with like-minded people, and I'd say we both have a goodly amount of those following us! ;)

I also have a very nifty widget that lists your last post when you leave a comment - another great traffic builder.

Have a wonderful weekend!

Shadow said...

beautiful. says so so much more...