instinctive the gaze to
touch primal yearnings
quickened, the pulse gives way
as rapturous waters
flow over the body
melted resolve holding sway
shhh, tis audible
love's heartbeat drones
melding of souls ensues
fine savor of essences
hanging heavy in air
all senses love's anguish imbues
complete resistance
becomes utter release
in silence the merging imparts
fulfillment of nature
divine love's deep heat
proves the joining of hearts
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this poem is in response to i will possess your heart over at Shadow's place.
Check it out!
Thanks Shadow, that was awesome.
7 comments:
Touching, your poem has the quality of a precious rhythm.
wow, what a follow-on. i love it. thank you larryg!
nice follow up to Shadows wonderful piece :-)
you two make this look easy what beautiful flow into each others thoughts.
So I am reading the sequel ill be back after I have been to Shadows place
You and Shadow make a great team and the power of poetry, fantastic
Wow!
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