At the start -
forgive -
before the pain -
let live -
one simple step -
prepared release -
saves time and brain -
it's sure to please -
the pressures off -
completely at ease -
so now mistakes -
bring on laughter -
cause it works -
it's what I'm after .
(Imagine a world where everyone puts forgiveness in place at the start of every relationship, even the briefest of encounters. Walls come down.)
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http://ytfe.blogspot.com/2008/05/our-hearts-are-sore.htmlforgive -
before the pain -
let live -
one simple step -
prepared release -
saves time and brain -
it's sure to please -
the pressures off -
completely at ease -
so now mistakes -
bring on laughter -
cause it works -
it's what I'm after .
(Imagine a world where everyone puts forgiveness in place at the start of every relationship, even the briefest of encounters. Walls come down.)
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I have challenged myself to refine, rewrite, and rework something I have done in the past once a week. This is a Monday feature for this year.
8 comments:
aaah, another improvement. i love the short words, lines on the second take. get's the message across beautifully
hey, you must still come and get this....
http://gsp-shadow.blogspot.com/2009/01/friends-award.html
nice sentiments
You did a great job with this one, it really captures the essence of life lessons
What a great way to begin a day - by remembering to forgive as you go! And that includes myself :)
Lovely remix Larry!
Forgivness... A word with so many layers.
"I forgive you", is sometimes easier said then done.
Larry - this is lovely. Though I have mixed feelings on forgiveness. There is forgiveness and there FORGIVENESS. As a survivor of violence, I do not forgive my assailants. They never asked for forgiveness, nor should it be granted. I don't hold hatred in my heart - but I do not forgive.
A wonderful idea, Larry. You really are stretching as far as you can!
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