dig dirt
stick spoon
walk wood
deep gorge
sticks race
stream current
kick leaves
fern moss
mud clay
stir dust
moist beneath
climb rock
vine rope
wade pool
silty bottom
earthen bed
starry ceiling
campfire meal
trail's end
sleep well
stick spoon
walk wood
deep gorge
sticks race
stream current
kick leaves
fern moss
mud clay
stir dust
moist beneath
climb rock
vine rope
wade pool
silty bottom
earthen bed
starry ceiling
campfire meal
trail's end
sleep well
10 comments:
Very cool. It's amazing that two words can be so descriptive and set the scene of a wonderful day!
Oh I liked this one - very creative
wow, beautiful. clever. amazingly descriptive. love it!
for the game, mr. b put his paw on the letter.... g
very nice! You must have such a calming affect on those around you! Wanna come live near me??
I can smell the dug up dirt, feel the wade pool, touch the rock, see the starry ceiling, and taste a good night's sleep. An interesting, sensory journey, Larry!
I just come here to feed my soul because I don't know a damn thing about poetry and that sort of wordification, but maybe with enough exposure to your words, it'll start to stick.
Sweetly
Spoken :)
That was very clever indeed, I thought of Washington State and walking through the Cascades just above the Hood Canal.
It' s very amazing and descriptive. I love it! :)
a very refreshing journey
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