more in the mind than:
a moonbeam can bathe,
a breeze can chat, a dusk can cloak,
awe can strike, a hug can awaken
more in the mind than on the lips,
or on the tongue
no wisp of a kiss can misconceive
l'étreinte, m'embrassent
to truly long, to deeply belong,
désirer ardemment mène à l'appartenance
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I have challenged myself to refine, rewrite, and rework something I have done in the past once a week. This is a Monday feature for this year.
see the original "what an embrace can do"
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5 comments:
woweeeee yes! rewriting is so working for you.
Wonderful piece I really liked the re write!
Beau, très bien fait mon ami !
that sounds yummiee, I'm going to kiss my honey now, thanks
beau en écrire
it's been a while -- i hope this is right ...
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