Sonnet for NCan you hear this o'er life's too noisy din?
Toasting her beauty while cup raises high.
Calls making it right though t'was no goodbye,
Or stretch beneath the stars heartbeat and grin,
Yes, sit awake watching you sleep again
On forehead places kiss and adds a sigh
Shows off, it's you in sweats or skirts to thigh
And pines wishing you with him e'er he's been.
Always want to hold hands with friends or not
Knows pretty isn't what makeup you've got
Reminds you this is one does deeply care
Feels best of luck to relish when they stare
One whose heart has begun a hum and purr
Elicits bold words to all, says "That's her!"
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Someone had challenged me to try a Sonnet
so hear is my first and no nobler topic.
7 comments:
Very nice sonnet...I like that knowing pretty isnt' what makeup you've got...
Great sonnet. Like the beginning: "Can you hear this o'er life's too noisy din?" Sets up the theme quite well.
very nice. I like it! :)
well, you've done a great job!
hmmmm. I really love this. thanks for sharing. you are an amazing writer. hugs ♥
This is so very romantic and sweet I really like it a lot, of course i like all your work
well done. :-) beauty is bare, don't you think? ...
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