Monday, January 26, 2009

critical activity - remix #4


yield to your own - best interest and theirs
loves soft expression - how gentle it wears
on the ear it lights - beautiful touching and fresh
soaks in with loveliness - good feelings mesh

a soulmate or partner - a friend or a child
the stout and strong - the meek and mild
intuition speaks volumes - pass it along
saying "I love you" - never goes wrong

just free the expression - allow words to bless
tends to connection - cures small or big mess
make this a beginning - trust loves saturation
let a sharing contagion - bring a new revelation

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I have challenged myself to refine, rewrite, and rework something I have done in the past once a week. This is a Monday feature for this year.

See the original post "Critical Activity"

6 comments:

Jack said...

I agree! Shout it from the rooftops. "I LOVE YOU"!

I loved this remix Larry... Happy Monday, hope your week goes well :)

Jessie said...

good advice!

Jessie said...

interesting new header there LarryG ... lol

are those just a few of your favorite things?? :-)

clean and crazy said...

I feel the love in your work I am very refreshed by the thought on a Monday with a chill in the air and now my heart is warm with your words,
Thanks Larry

Blicky Kitty said...

I like the idea of experiencing the work in progress. I LOVE Mary Oliver and the new header.

Shadow said...

nothing can ever go wrong or happen to you with this much caring and love around....