I have challenged myself to refine, rewrite, and rework something I have done in the past once a week. I think this will be a Monday regular for '09. This was the first post on this blog dated Nov '07.Now for the remix:
feeling is remembering - remix '09
Instincts experience formative substance,
sharing the journey, narrative's abundance
the near, the distant, collect in the brain,
enjoyment and pleasures, embody the same,
interconnections are roots nurturing lives,
painting verbal murals, imagination's eyes,
every strand of the epic colorfully woven
biographical tapestry's gift to be chosen.
7 comments:
wow, that's not remixed, that's redone. and beautifully so, i must say. definately like the remix more...
i agree with Shadow -- well done.
Excellent work once again, Larry!!!
But I also like the flow of the original "feeling is remembering"... reminds me of lyrics :)
You have such an intellectual vocabulary and you use it so wonderfully- Well Done
How cool is THIS idea??!
I love it and I agree with the others...
"painting verbal murals"
love the wordplay!
As you will already know, I LOVE the picture. And I am not sure you need to re-work any of your writings. They are already so well done!
I really like "painting verbal murals" as well. Great imagery.
Missed popping over here! Hope the new year is treating you well so far. :-D
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